For my portfolio assignment I Chose to revise my argument analysis essay. Some strengths in this essay are that I supported my thesis with evidence and quotes from the text, and I also described the position with my own reasons as well. Some of my weaknesses are that I didn't connect the ideas clearly to the main idea and how it all relates. To effectively revise my essay I am going to re read every paragraph and see how I can connect the ideas to the thesis and make sure I clearly explain further anything else. I need to make sure I clarify the ideas and support them with facts.
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